Peer Review #2 'Road to Drakkin'

I choose to review Road to Drakkin, Which was a Game that one of my classmates had created. I enjoyed it immensely. The world that was created in this short game was amazingly detailed and well thought. Though it took me multiple reads of each description to truely understand the layout of this fictitious world before I actually started playing, without taking that extra time to read through it I think that I would not have enjoyed it quiet as much. The being able to add in your own name and precious item gave it another amazing touch and wrote a story of 'Ana' the murderous prison who was on a quest to escape prison to find 'A passing grade'.

It was not without fault completely. It was unfortunate that the game was written under the assumption that the main character would be male, which I am not, It would have been nice if there was a choice in gender or if the game didn't refer to a gender at all. There were also a few grammatical errors but nothing too distracting from the story. I also seemed to have come across an incomplete passage on my second play, Yes second as on the first I died, but with how many paths are in this game I'm not surprised that there are a few incomplete passages. Though it did mean that I had to restart the game and go again I did enjoy picking new paths to get to my destination.

Overall, again, the game was really good, with some sort of art work, background, music and small amounts of editing I know that this game would be amazing. More than likely something that can be marketable.

Road to Drakkin By Chip Geeson: http://philome.la/SulivanoTheGrea/road-to-drakkin-10/play